In the English class last week, Sam fell asleep. The teacher was teaching the new lesson, but Sam felt bored as usual. He always did badly in this subject. In addition, the weather that day seemed to be extremely cold, and it made Sam easily fall asleep.
In his dream, Sam became a teacher who was teaching in his most fearful subject, English! He found himself standing on the platform nervously. However, even though Sam did his best explaining grammar, he still couldn’t make his students understand! As a result, all the students gradually nodded off. Filled with anger, Sam went down the platform and woke up all the students angrily. “Wake up!” he shouted. In the meantime, Sam was shocked by his teacher’s voice! He opened his eyes and looked around; suddenly realized that he had come back to the reality. Despite his classmate’s teasing, Sam was so glad that it’s just a dream!
Dear Ann:
You did a great job except for two minor mistakes in the expressions -extreme cold and Fill with anger.